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so i guess this is a place to put thoughts, work and expression in all forms.

27.2.06

education

i.
rubbing this dying
(-----)bird(-----)
i wished for
genies
who could sell me
a complete set (trading cards)
of imaginary
realities
ii.
from con(fess)ions
in hospital beds
with sticky fingers
and animal-ian parasites
doctors nod
in disapproval
iii.
(---)birds(---)
were a bad idea
just look at the name
foul—fowl—foul
like broken wings

6 Comments:

  • At 4:15 PM, Blogger katy said…

    i "featured" you. which doesn't really mean much because i'm not nearly as widely read as say silliman or the chubaka blog, but you got yourself a link and a blurb. thanks for the comment on that old poem of mine.

     
  • At 12:30 PM, Blogger jhabes said…

    thanks katy really apprecite it. your site rocks by the way, i have just enough ambition to post my poetry...

     
  • At 8:40 AM, Blogger katy said…

    happy birthday!

    you made billy's list

     
  • At 8:02 AM, Blogger Rob Budde said…

    this one's abt masturbating too. c'mon: "rubbing the bird" . . .

     
  • At 4:36 PM, Blogger jhabes said…

    you know rob, i dig your into the whole love in poetry thing, but i got bigger ideas than just masturbation...i think. damn, im second guessing myself.
    ps. i really like the "poetry" series you got going...

     
  • At 1:22 AM, Blogger Clifford Duffy said…

    rubbing this dying
    (-----)bird(-----)
    i wished for
    genies
    who could sell me
    a complete set (trading cards)
    of imaginary
    realities




    interestingwork here jhabes. come along to the Brim and visit us.

     

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